Hello I’m Somran,
I liked your guide to a plant, I bet your plant is very healthy and has grown rapidly,
Next time make sure you check your work because there are some few errors in there. 🙂
Gearies Primary School
Karolina from Gearies Primary School 5B London says:
Hi, I really like your title of your story! It shows care for mini plants, which is really nice and kind. Work on your punctuation more because then it sound more likely.
This is a good story and it shows you care about your mint plant, check your grammar, punctuation, spellings and if some sentences make sense. Good job. 🙂
nice work
I did that to and I done mint to do you want to have a challenge to see whos grows the tallest.
Thanks for telling us what you done. From Rosie
Hi, I’m Esha from Gearies Primary.
I like your use of language but you should check proper nouns with capital letters.
Keep up the good work!
Hello I’m Somran,
I liked your guide to a plant, I bet your plant is very healthy and has grown rapidly,
Next time make sure you check your work because there are some few errors in there. 🙂
Gearies Primary School
Hi, I really like your title of your story! It shows care for mini plants, which is really nice and kind. Work on your punctuation more because then it sound more likely.
This is a good story and it shows you care about your mint plant, check your grammar, punctuation, spellings and if some sentences make sense. Good job. 🙂
Love it,also like that you have said about how you are taking care of your plant.
By Harley macpherson
Nice description of a plant