One Word Story

Posted on March 5, 2015 by Deleted User
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9 Responses to One Word Story

  1. bonnr says:
    March 5, 2015 at 5:24 pm

    I love your story.it make me crack up I can not wait to see what you write next.
    FROM ROSIE

  2. kingk1 says:
    March 5, 2015 at 7:38 pm

    LOVE the story it made me crack up when I read the part about the toe falling off!!!

    Kiera

  3. Zaeem says:
    March 6, 2015 at 2:05 pm

    It is a great story and you have great imagination. You just need to check your grammar, punctuation and if sentences makes sense.

  4. Karolina says:
    March 6, 2015 at 2:05 pm

    I like your story because it made me laugh really badly! Just work on your spellings more. Karolina from GPS. 🙂

  5. clana says:
    March 6, 2015 at 4:33 pm

    Good but you spelt flea wrong flea is spelt F L E A

  6. jackc says:
    March 7, 2015 at 9:03 am

    I love your story it made me laugh at when his toe fell off

  7. robim says:
    March 9, 2015 at 6:30 pm

    Good Story i liked When the toe fell of did he scream? SCAREY!!!! Love it Cant wait for next part of the story 🙂

  8. fartj says:
    March 10, 2015 at 6:43 pm

    I love your story because it made me crack up and I can’t wait to see whats next.
    By Jessica,

  9. Kiera says:
    March 11, 2015 at 7:00 pm

    Are any of you guys going to carry it on.

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