the death machine

Posted on March 6, 2015 by Deleted User
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2 Responses to the death machine

  1. abdim says:
    March 12, 2015 at 2:57 pm

    I enjoyed reading your paragraphs but,maybe you can check through you spellings like ‘slowy’.Double check your spellings good description.By Maisha

  2. danqn says:
    March 12, 2015 at 2:57 pm

    I like this a lot Ashleigh maybe you can add in some more adjectives and connectives. Other than that this is really great to read.

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