Well done for telling us all about
the Asda workshop. I’ll tell you
one thing to do and this is to write
your name after you write your
own blog even when you comment
to someone’s piece of work.So
remember what I told you ok,
well anyway you have a good piece
of work. By Jessica,
Well done for telling us all about
the Asda workshop. I’ll tell you
one thing to do and this is to write
your name after you write your
own blog even when you comment
to someone’s piece of work.So
remember what I told you ok,
well anyway you have a good piece
of work. By Jessica,
Oh and one more thing
is to use capital letters
at the beggining of your
sentence.By Jessica,
you have missed your name out but really good and the spellings are all right.Maybe you could do that in all of the books.
By Harley Macpherson