We thought your recount was really good. You used time words and exclamation marks to make it interesting. The heading was big. We thought the trip was epic too!
Elephants
We like your recount. You used time words like next to make your writing interesting. Your writing is epic because you use capital letters, finger spaces, full stops and exclamation marks. We thought the trip was cool and wicked.
That sounds like a really cool school trip.
Freya King Elephants class
We thought your recount was really good. You used time words and exclamation marks to make it interesting. The heading was big. We thought the trip was epic too!
Elephants
Thank you Elephants! 🙂
We like your work too.
We like your recount. You used time words like next to make your writing interesting. Your writing is epic because you use capital letters, finger spaces, full stops and exclamation marks. We thought the trip was cool and wicked.
Kolas
Good trip whish I was there to experience it