The grandad in your story sounds like a good man. I’m guessing he is going to help someone in the story, and maybe then he will feel less guilty for not helping his friend. Well done, Mrs Coop.
Hi Michael,
It sounds like your granddad a very courage’s man as he was in the war. It is sorry to hear about your dads friend that had passed away in the war. I think that this is a wonderful story as it describes a lot about your grandfather. I like the choice of shoes I my favourite shoes as well. This is amazing however to make it a little bit better do not repeate the same words over and over again. Other than that it was spectacular.
The grandad in your story sounds like a good man. I’m guessing he is going to help someone in the story, and maybe then he will feel less guilty for not helping his friend. Well done, Mrs Coop.
Well done Michael. 🙂 I think your granddad should find a lovely lady and fall in love.
Julia Brkic 🙂
Hi Michael,
It sounds like your granddad a very courage’s man as he was in the war. It is sorry to hear about your dads friend that had passed away in the war. I think that this is a wonderful story as it describes a lot about your grandfather. I like the choice of shoes I my favourite shoes as well. This is amazing however to make it a little bit better do not repeate the same words over and over again. Other than that it was spectacular.
From Dylan
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