Cold Land

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6 Responses to Cold Land

  1. incej says:

    Wow that is some excllent work

  2. bainm says:

    This a very very good piece of writing. I am in year 5 and honestly I think it is better than my writing!

  3. sarfg says:

    Very well done, Jessica! The only thing you could work on is after you put a full stop you have to do a finger space

    Gabrielle, Rome, Mr Pitty

  4. kingk1 says:

    Love the border Jess!

    Kiera

  5. mustl says:

    That was a fantastic piece of writing. Was that from the ice palace?
    by Lia Mustafa-vicente.

  6. young1 says:

    That was very good Jessica
    By Grace

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