Well done Katie, I’m glad you learnt a lot from Jack. Remember to include punctuation in your writing! You have forgotten a questions mark and also some commas/full stops.
Mr. Berry
I like it but you need capital letters.
Miyah L
I like it Katie but try to remember your punctuation next time.eg commas and full stops. Also remember to put your name on your work next time. Sally
You could have put a comma or 2. I had trouble reading it.
Amazing!
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Well done Katie, I’m glad you learnt a lot from Jack. Remember to include punctuation in your writing! You have forgotten a questions mark and also some commas/full stops.
Mr. Berry
I like it but you need capital letters.
Miyah L
I like it Katie but try to remember your punctuation next time.eg commas and full stops. Also remember to put your name on your work next time.
Sally
You could have put a comma or 2. I had trouble reading it.
Amazing!