The Ice Palace

Posted on March 20, 2015 by Deleted User
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3 Responses to The Ice Palace

  1. swinters says:
    March 20, 2015 at 1:28 pm

    Wow Abbie, this is an excellent story. You used complex sentences correctly and excellent adjectives. Well done. You just need to check that your last sentence isn’t too long.
    Miss Winters

  2. adjep says:
    March 21, 2015 at 10:42 am

    Wow!
    I really enjoyed your story and is happy to know what happens next.

    From Princess

  3. kingk1 says:
    March 22, 2015 at 6:36 am

    After Michael could there be a comma?

    Kiera

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