Wow, excellent story Princess! I love that you used adjectives and ambitious vocabulary. I also like how you tried to build suspense. Well done. You just need to check some of your punctuation where you have used speech. Miss Winters
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From Princess xxxxooooooxoxo
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Wow, excellent story Princess! I love that you used adjectives and ambitious vocabulary. I also like how you tried to build suspense. Well done. You just need to check some of your punctuation where you have used speech.
Miss Winters
Thanks
From Princess xxxxooooooxoxo