ice palace

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3 Responses to ice palace

  1. swinters says:

    Some great ideas Shayden, I like how you have used some adverbs. You need to check the spellings of some of your words.

  2. adjep says:

    Well done Shayden!
    You have used great ideas and adverbs.
    You may have to look back at your work and correct your mistakes.

    From Princess

  3. Anonymous says:

    Try to look at your sentences for full stops and capital letters but I like your description. Amberw

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