You did a good story, but you did make a mistake, you spelt whole incorrectly, hole is like a gap, whole means all of it, so you do 1 mistake but overall good work
Amazing story, you really went in to detail which makes your story better.
From: Noha Gearies Primary School.
Can u change the writeing i can not read it:[
Cant read the writing because its in that funny way but its still good
From Miller
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You did a good story, but you did make a mistake, you spelt whole incorrectly, hole is like a gap, whole means all of it, so you do 1 mistake but overall good work
Amazing story, you really went in to detail which makes your story better.
From: Noha
Gearies Primary School.
Can u change the writeing i can not read it:[
Cant read the writing because its in that funny way but its still good
From Miller