Hi Frankie and Erin we like your description of the Ice Palace; great use of adjectives! Where did you get the idea from ?To improve your writing look carefully at your sentences to check you have always got a capital letter at the start and some punctuation at the end. We would love to see more of your writing! From Hampton Hill Junior School class 4M.
Well Done Erin and Frankie 🙂
welll done girls. Hope
good job erin and frankie 🙂
Hi Frankie and Erin we like your description of the Ice Palace; great use of adjectives! Where did you get the idea from ?To improve your writing look carefully at your sentences to check you have always got a capital letter at the start and some punctuation at the end. We would love to see more of your writing! From Hampton Hill Junior School class 4M.
hi girls. I just read this again and it is amazing