A very interesting diary extract Logan. Just remember to use capital letters and full stops in the appropriate places! Also, don’t forget to put your name at the end!
I think you have used a great range of adjectives and it is very enjoyable I could fell how Bradly was feeling at the time but remember to put full stops but over all it is a great piece of writing well done Logan! Valeria B
A very interesting diary extract Logan. Just remember to use capital letters and full stops in the appropriate places! Also, don’t forget to put your name at the end!
Mr. Berry.
Great story but a couple spelling mistakes but that doesn’t matter it was still good.
Mason
I think you have used a great range of adjectives and it is very enjoyable I could fell how Bradly was feeling at the time but remember to put full stops but over all it is a great piece of writing well done Logan! Valeria B
Rember to use capital letters and full stop and put your name at the end. From Michael.