war horse

Posted on January 30, 2015 by Deleted User
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4 Responses to war horse

  1. oberl says:
    February 2, 2015 at 12:01 pm

    Can you put in capital letters in to inprove your work.leon

  2. Ashleigh loud aides says:
    February 2, 2015 at 12:15 pm

    This is a nice script short but lots of detail, but you could use some more punctuatin

  3. kendp says:
    February 2, 2015 at 12:15 pm

    I like the choice of words and I would say you could put the stage directions at the beginning.

  4. harri1 says:
    February 2, 2015 at 6:21 pm

    I like it

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