I think this is a good part of a story, great description!
We really liked your creep ending; imagine eating humans, yuck! We also liked the idea of intelligent creatures that can’t speak to each other. Next time check your punctuation.
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I think this is a good part of a story, great description!
We really liked your creep ending; imagine eating humans, yuck! We also liked the idea of intelligent creatures that can’t speak to each other. Next time check your punctuation.