Oh dear, this is quite a shocking story so far! I hope something positive happens next to uplift the reader! Keep up theb blogging Amy, it’s great that you are doing so much. Mrs Coop
Fantastic work! That was such a dramatic story and I really loved it so much. Just one thing, you have got some capital letter errors but otherwise I have nothing bad to say.
Oh dear, this is quite a shocking story so far! I hope something positive happens next to uplift the reader! Keep up theb blogging Amy, it’s great that you are doing so much. Mrs Coop
Fantastic work! That was such a dramatic story and I really loved it so much. Just one thing, you have got some capital letter errors but otherwise I have nothing bad to say.
Keep it up!