Maisha there are quite a lot of mistakes, like ‘coome’, ‘darlet’, ‘diddn’t’ and ‘stinged’ which should be stung but there are good adjectives and verbs. However I don’t quite understand what you mean by ‘shot our bodies as well as bloods were flooded’. Just ty to make sure you have enough time to chech through your work. Also to check your spellings like ‘nevous’ and ‘evryone’. But it is a good descrption.
Yumna
Mrs Wells, maybe I havent cheked through and i’ve seen alot spelling mistakes.i’ll just have to try again and again.i’ll have to read it through every time I blog.I think there is missing punctuation.
Some great description used. Remember to check your spellings and punctuation thoroughly! Mrs Wells
Maisha there are quite a lot of mistakes, like ‘coome’, ‘darlet’, ‘diddn’t’ and ‘stinged’ which should be stung but there are good adjectives and verbs. However I don’t quite understand what you mean by ‘shot our bodies as well as bloods were flooded’. Just ty to make sure you have enough time to chech through your work. Also to check your spellings like ‘nevous’ and ‘evryone’. But it is a good descrption.
Yumna
Mrs Wells, maybe I havent cheked through and i’ve seen alot spelling mistakes.i’ll just have to try again and again.i’ll have to read it through every time I blog.I think there is missing punctuation.