challenge 1 awnser

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4 Responses to challenge 1 awnser

  1. sberry says:

    A really good start and some good ideas Cally! However, remember to use a capital ‘I’ and check some of your spellings.

    Mr. Berry

  2. hudst says:

    I like your ideas!but please add some punctuation. from Tom Hudson.

  3. kerrs says:

    Try to remember your capital letters in places you have not put them and try not to put the in the middle of words
    Sally kerr

  4. hughh says:

    you are right Mr.berry

    harry hughes

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