Hello Koala’s
Our journey was a long journey because we had a long walk to the station. We liked the train ride because we played I spy. Elephants would love to go back and go inside another book. We felt excited when we went inside the book?
Did you go inside the same book as us?
From Elephants
Hello Koalas, I enjoyed reading your blog. I had a great time going to Discover with Hippo class. My favourite part was playing in the kitchen and on the beach. I enjoyed writing a label in the lost and found office too. Mrs Coop
We like how you have used an exclamation mark.
We like how you have used time words.
We like how you have used adjectives.
Next time read your work twice to make sure it makes sense.
From Hippo Class 🙂
Well done you used time words. We liked the exclamation mark. Goo full stops and capital letters.
Next time remember the d in explored.
Great recount Koala’s. Well done!!
Hello Koala’s
Our journey was a long journey because we had a long walk to the station. We liked the train ride because we played I spy. Elephants would love to go back and go inside another book. We felt excited when we went inside the book?
Did you go inside the same book as us?
From Elephants
Hello Koalas, I enjoyed reading your blog. I had a great time going to Discover with Hippo class. My favourite part was playing in the kitchen and on the beach. I enjoyed writing a label in the lost and found office too. Mrs Coop