Well done, I like how you have tried to describe Ivan’s land. I think the evil Starjik kidnaps children and takes them to his ice palace. Next time, try to include more adjectives that show how cold the land is.
You have used a lot of description and connectives. But you could have used some complex sentences and maybe Miss Winters will show your work to the class!
Well done, I like how you have tried to describe Ivan’s land. I think the evil Starjik kidnaps children and takes them to his ice palace. Next time, try to include more adjectives that show how cold the land is.
Miss Winters
Nice adjectives Harley
You have used a lot of description and connectives. But you could have used some complex sentences and maybe Miss Winters will show your work to the class!
Ryan Safo-Frimpong
I like that u said if u turn east u will see Nice!
From Miller Robinson
Maybe Starjik didn’t have a very nice childhood.
Kiera
Maybe Starjik likes the cold I know I don’t .
Kiera