Oh no, I can’t believe you got shot! Your writing really drew me in, I felt like I was sharing in your adventure! I will ask Mr Luderman to set up the i pads to do spell check- that will help you correct your spelling mistakes next time. Keep up the excellent blogging, Mrs Coop
That is really scary! From Amelia Tattam in London class in year 3
Oh no, I can’t believe you got shot! Your writing really drew me in, I felt like I was sharing in your adventure! I will ask Mr Luderman to set up the i pads to do spell check- that will help you correct your spelling mistakes next time. Keep up the excellent blogging, Mrs Coop
I totally agree with you Mrs Coop. Totally agree.
It’s a shame you forgot to put your name on this, I am wondering who wrote it. Mrs Coop
Peace
Realy good expression , of dalek from Paigej.
I love all the vocabulary and the similes! I don’t think there is anything to disagree with! This story is amazing.
You used lots of amazing description. fabian