Wow Julia, I love your descriptive language. I’d love to know what her first ever invention was. I guess she will get captured by spies, as they are angry that she hacked into their website! Mrs Coop
You’ve used some really good describing words like smooth and more keep going and keep it up. Make sure you read it through and add some more interesting adjectives.You can use some dropping clause to add more information.
Wow Julia, I love your descriptive language. I’d love to know what her first ever invention was. I guess she will get captured by spies, as they are angry that she hacked into their website! Mrs Coop
AWSOME WORDS, inquisitive what a good word
rubye
very interesting story.What will happen next?
By Charlie
Wow Julia, I love your descriptive language. Emma Flanagan mower
Excellent vocabulary!
By Ciara Timcke
Well done Julia.
I think Sophie will be captured by the spies.
I really your characters profile was really good.
by Emily Cox
I really like your idea Julia i think the spies will capture Sophie,and Sophie will make some kind of invention tha will set her free
Oooooo, I love the descriptive writing that you have used
Extrodanairy vocabulary and outstanding descriptive language!!!!
You’ve used some really good describing words like smooth and more keep going and keep it up. Make sure you read it through and add some more interesting adjectives.You can use some dropping clause to add more information.
by Maisha