chapter1 waking up in daylight

Posted on March 12, 2015 by Deleted User
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2 Responses to chapter1 waking up in daylight

  1. ccoop says:
    March 13, 2015 at 6:58 am

    This is a good opening part to your story, well done! You have included lots of detail. Your simile makes me think that Julie has a ruthless streak in her! I ant to find out what is so important about the dictionary, and who is phoning Julie!
    Great, Mrs Coop

  2. brkij says:
    March 20, 2015 at 9:39 am

    Is this Ruby’s ? I think that Julie should go into the WC and answer the phone. I love that it is a romantic story.
    Julia Brkic 🙂

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