I love it you just forgot to set the scene and it is a bit like a play script.
very good vocabulary but maybe add more connectives
I like this story because I always wanted Stig to meet Barney’s family. I love the part where Barney said that Stig should dress in proper clothes. Remember to add some missing punctuation and check the spelling of Lou.
Vicky this is really good, I like the way that you have described the robbers. But you could try to add a bit more information. Yumna
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I love it you just forgot to set the scene and it is a bit like a play script.
very good vocabulary but maybe add more connectives
I like this story because I always wanted Stig to meet Barney’s family. I love the part where Barney said that Stig should dress in proper clothes. Remember to add some missing punctuation and check the spelling of Lou.
Vicky this is really good, I like the way that you have described the robbers. But you could try to add a bit more information.
Yumna