Hi Amber I like the way you put lots of punctuation In your writing, I also like the way you put lots of description in your story.
by Zaynab from Gearies primary school
Wow! Fantastic story Amber. I really like how you used to be continued to give it more of a scary effect. Amazing speech and adjectives.
Keep writing!
From: Noha
Gearies Primary School
Wow, this is great. Fantastic use of punctuation Amber! You just need to use question marks now where you have asked questions.
Miss Winters
Excellent use of adjectives Amber.
Good work amber i like your story by best friend chelseaT
Hi Amber I like the way you put lots of punctuation In your writing, I also like the way you put lots of description in your story.
by Zaynab from Gearies primary school
Wow! Fantastic story Amber. I really like how you used to be continued to give it more of a scary effect. Amazing speech and adjectives.
Keep writing!
From: Noha
Gearies Primary School
Well done Amber
I like that there are no mistakes in your work and you have used adjectives.
I also like that you have not used the word said.
From Princess
I LOVE IT ! BY ROSIE
Very good amber.
Kiera