Dalek

Posted on March 3, 2015 by Deleted User
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6 Responses to Dalek

  1. awells says:
    March 3, 2015 at 3:44 pm

    Some effective vocabulary used. Remember to check your spellings and punctuation thoroughly. Mrs Wells

  2. davie says:
    March 4, 2015 at 12:08 pm

    Great start and finish maybe try and put more adjectives

  3. abdim says:
    March 4, 2015 at 12:15 pm

    Tia and Rosie your paragraph was amazing but you should add more adjectives to make it more interesting. Maisha

  4. Jayanna ( Gearies primary school) says:
    March 6, 2015 at 2:15 pm

    well done Rosie and Tia a great use of description! keep the work up

  5. taylg says:
    March 6, 2015 at 10:08 pm

    Very effective but add more about the Dalek. Gabrielle

  6. ashleigh says:
    March 9, 2015 at 2:05 pm

    I like this a lot but a little more discription but nice

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