The Dalek by Leon and Tulay

Posted on March 3, 2015 by Deleted User
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6 Responses to The Dalek by Leon and Tulay

  1. awells says:
    March 3, 2015 at 3:43 pm

    Some effective vocabulary used. You need to tell your reader more about the Dalek – use all the senses. Mrs Wells

  2. huset says:
    March 4, 2015 at 12:06 pm

    I think we could have put more exciting words in,but it’s still good.

    (; Tulay

  3. shehh says:
    March 4, 2015 at 12:06 pm

    This is amazing just add a bit more description even though you have some.
    By hannan

  4. davie says:
    March 4, 2015 at 12:11 pm

    You had a great start but maybe try to put more adjectives Emma and Luke

  5. young says:
    March 4, 2015 at 12:18 pm

    Very well detailed I liked it

  6. louca says:
    March 18, 2015 at 12:08 pm

    well detailed and nice description in this [well done]

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