Some effective vocabulary used here! However, yellow is not the best colour for a post – it makes it very difficult to read!
It is very well detailed and is one of the best I have readed
Very good Ashleigh and Richard, however you could try using a darker colour! Make sure you don’t use another capital letter for a new line. You have missed a few commas’.
It is amazing
I think we did well on this
You forgot some punctuation By Alfie and Callum
COLOUR!!!!but nice sentences keep up on the good words
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Some effective vocabulary used here! However, yellow is not the best colour for a post – it makes it very difficult to read!
It is very well detailed and is one of the best I have readed
Very good Ashleigh and Richard, however you could try using a darker colour! Make sure you don’t use another capital letter for a new line. You have missed a few commas’.
It is amazing
I think we did well on this
You forgot some punctuation
By Alfie and
Callum
COLOUR!!!!but nice sentences keep up on the good words