Very good Natalie there’s really great adjectives and verbs. I like how you said that it the Darlek said exterminate and then you said it was ringing through your ears. But however you do need to make sure that you say through-out and not throught. Anyways I really liked reading your description. Just remember to check for CAPITAL LETTERS!
Some really effective vocabulary used, Natalie. Remember to check which tense you are writing in.
Very good Natalie there’s really great adjectives and verbs. I like how you said that it the Darlek said exterminate and then you said it was ringing through your ears. But however you do need to make sure that you say through-out and not throught. Anyways I really liked reading your description. Just remember to check for CAPITAL LETTERS!
Yumna