chapter 1- The Magic Binoculars

2 Responses to chapter 1- The Magic Binoculars

1. ccoop says:

   March 13, 2015 at 6:55 am

   I find this font a bit difficult to read!
   I think Richard and his tiger should go on an adventure- I look forward to finding out what happens next. Remember to read your work carefully, a couple of sentences do not make sense.
   Well done, I love some of your descriptions, Mrs Coop
2. faulm1 says:

   March 20, 2015 at 9:46 am

   I found your work difficult to read because it’s all curly! You could add a simile. How old was his dad when he died? BY MICHAEL.

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