Chapter 1- wake up

Posted on March 12, 2015 by Deleted User
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2 Responses to Chapter 1- wake up

  1. ccoop says:
    March 13, 2015 at 6:51 am

    It’s an interesting beginning, but you forgot to describe anything about your character- what he looked like, his darkest secret, his biggest fear and so on! Mrs Coop

  2. teesc says:
    March 20, 2015 at 11:06 am

    by chelsea sorry

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