I wonder if her dream might come true! But does she want to be rich? I look forward to finding out more next week, Mrs Coop
Two things drees is spelt dress and berreys is spelt berries, anyway that’s really good from Lia
good but you spelt dress wrong you put drees and berreys is berries you need to look threw
She could think that her dream was real and then she tries to go and find the cave of treasure. I found your writing very easy to read and I can’t wait to hear the next part of the story! by Lia mustafa-vicente.
Thanks now i can inprove for next week :]. chelsea
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I wonder if her dream might come true! But does she want to be rich? I look forward to finding out more next week, Mrs Coop
Two things drees is spelt dress and berreys is spelt berries, anyway that’s really good from Lia
good but you spelt dress wrong you put drees and berreys is berries you need to look threw
She could think that her dream was real and then she tries to go and find the cave of treasure. I found your writing very easy to read and I can’t wait to hear the next part of the story!
by
Lia mustafa-vicente.
Thanks now i can inprove for next week :]. chelsea